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The meadow of sins by ~KAMELOTrealm:iconKAMELOTrealm:



The grip of dementia
that smiles from a veil
distorts all my visions
my passions of clay
she gathers the nymphos
the child and the rain
the ballet of death
is our own masquerade

The lanterns are shining
from my stoned demise
that sparkles like stars
while I'm dying inside
the ghost of my sorrow
you just cannot bear
for nothing is worth
of my needless despair

The ballet won't stop
till out voices are whispers
like black frozen drops
in the hands of our twister

You walk on the scaffold
you try not to see
you blame me for something
you seem to esteem
in who is delighted
to laugh at your sorrow
in name of your love
she'll kill you tomorrow

Silent is howling
your death dressed in white
you don't want to see
that your time now is nigh
I may be deceived
by my silent devotion
but all that I see
is a shallow black ocean

The ballet won't stop
till our voices are whispers
like black frozen drops
in the hands of our twister

The dead cannot tell us
what's wrong and what's right
but walking together
we shall see the light
©2008 ~KAMELOTrealm
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Written some nights ago. Comments are more than welcome.

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~songofthepheonix:iconsongofthepheonix: Jun 28, 2008, 4:31:40 PM
Were you by chance depressed when your wrote this?

I like it a lot. There are some places where you may want to check your grammar, for instance here:
"for nothing is worth of my needless despair"

Otherwise it's very good. I know you have a youtube account, if you come up with a tune for this you should add it and link it here, I'd like to hear it :)

--
I blessed myself, so proud I've been!
Now I'm myself laid bare to sin!
~KAMELOTrealm:iconKAMELOTrealm: 6 days 20 hours ago
Well, this was dedicated to my best friend, as he used to have a kind of really difficult situation with his "kind of girlfriend".
He was the one I cared the most about, more than how I care about myself, my family. I felt terrible for his situation.

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!

I'm taking piano and guitar lessons now, if I end up writing music for this one, I'll surely put it up on YouTube :aww:

--
When someone laughs you turn away
glad people make you feel unsafe
there's a place where all is sound
where you know you won\'t be found
where the sun and the moon never shine
and it's easy to hide in the dark

-"Sanctuary", Conception